EROTIC FICTION: Hitting The Shower
“Hitting The Shower” tells the story of a guy working out in the gym who spots a young, hung jock and they proceed to cruise each other before putting on a hot j/o show in the showers. Read an excerpt below:
I was still sitting down, bending over, and putting my clothes in the locker and even with my eyes looking straight forward I couldn't help but catch of glimpse of this huge, flopping thing that popped out when the kid pulled down his shorts and underwear. When he had first came in the locker room I wasn't thinking too much about him stripping next to me. I just don't have that 'cruising' agenda when I go to the gym. However, there was just no way I could not notice that this kid was now standing right next to me in this cramped locker room, now totally naked, and the cock that he had hanging down from his waist was fucking HUGE. I found that my brain had suddenly shifted to slow motion. Although he was only standing there for a couple of seconds before he grabbed his towel and started to head to the shower, I was still able to see every detail of this unbelievable cock that was now at eye level only inches from my face. It was super thick, long, and hung down from a small patch of pubes. I didn't have a measuring tape, but soft the kid was hanging down around 8" I guessed. I couldn't tell if he was cut or uncut because although I still saw the head of his cock he still had a good chunk of skin that was hiding the majority of it. Although he wasn't facing me directly I noticed one large vein on the front of his cock that ran all the way from the base to. his head. He also had a set of balls on him that any guy would kill for. They were big, heavy, and hung down from the base of his cock. These were not balls that were scrunched up in a wrinkled nut sack, but instead a set that just hung down low. As he moved to wrap his towel around his waist his balls were swinging back and forth. I saw all of this in just mere seconds but the image is seared into my head. I have seen big cocks like this before, but it was just the surprise of a cock like this hanging off of a young kid that just completely caught me off guard. I realize that guys who have big dicks of course had them when they were younger, but for some reason I have this distorted view that only older guys have the real mammoth cocks. I also didn't start playing around with guys on a regular basis until I was in college so I wasn't used to seeing guys who were probably no older than seniors in high school. All of this happened and I somehow managed to keep putting things in my locker and pretended that I didn't notice this monster that had just flopped out of nowhere and was now bouncing around at eye level. I don't cruise guys at the gym, but I also don't cruise guys where I'm unsure if they want to be cruised. As the kid walked to the shower I stood up, wrapped my towel around my waist, and just thought to myself, "Wow, that was a fucking huge cock.". I wasn't horned up, wasn't getting hard, or any of that crap. I just found myself thinking that this kid was the luckiest kid around and he probably wasn't even old enough to know it yet. I found it amusing as I headed to the shower. There are only 4 shower stalls, a set of two on opposite walls, with a short wall between the two showers on each side. A shower curtain hung on each stall for privacy. As I walked in I could see that the kid had taken the shower on the left on the far side of the room and from my initial viewpoint I could not see him. I walked over to the shower on the opposite side of the room and as I took off my towel and reached up to pull the shower curtain closed I looked over and I saw that the kid had also pulled his shower curtain closed. but only half way. He had left the shower curtain open so that the open space faced the back of the room. So basically if you first walked in the shower room, or were to walk by the shower room, you would not be able to see him as the shower curtain would block the view from that angle. However, if you went fully into the shower room and took the shower stall directly across from him, you could see him clearly. There had been a few occasions when I could tell guys were cruising in the shower and this was exactly how they did it. They took the far stall and then closed it only half way or so, but you couldn't see anything unless you also took the far back stall on the opposite side of the room. I have taken a shower on more than a few occasions when I could tell that the guy had purposely not pulled the shower curtain all the way closed. Only one time, when it was this very cute and sexy Asian guy, did I also play along with the game and very innocently we watched each other take a shower, soap up, stroke our cock, our ass, etc. It was more erotic than overtly sexual and when it was over we acted like nothing happened. Neither of us came, or really was stroking that hard to begin with. I guess if I had been a little more aggressive, or if he had been, that maybe something could have happened. But neither of us pressed farther than knowing that each of us was enjoying the other naked in the shower. There was one other time where I think two guys may have been in the same stall but because the shower curtain ran all the way to the floor it was impossible to tell for sure. I just knew that I saw two guys go into the shower room and by the time I got in the room there was only one stall with the shower curtain completely closed. I like to relax and take a long shower and when I left whoever was in that stall, whether it was one or more guys, were still in there. A few minutes later when I was brushing my teeth at the sink I again saw the same two guys coming out of the shower so I'm positive they were doing something in there. The only thing I remember thinking at the time was that if there were two of them in the one stall you would never know unless you literally pulled back the shower curtain. As I walked into the stall across from the kid I had to make a quick decision. Did I just ignore him, close my curtain all the way, shower up and get out of there?. Or did I also just close the shower curtain half way or so and pretend that I was just too lazy to pull the curtain all the way?. I quickly reasoned that if the kid didn't care enough to close his curtain all the way that he wouldn't care, and probably not even notice, that another guy had done the same. I've seen plenty of men who were definitely not cruising who are just very comfortable being nude in a locker room. I was brought up playing sports, gym class, etc., where you just stripped down and showered together and a lot of guys just keep that mentality as they get older. For all I knew this kid was just going through the motions and just not caring that he was standing there showering where others could see him. I still, though, got in the stall and then pulled the curtain only half way closed and turned on the shower. I stood sideways, and out of the stream of water, as I waited for the water to get warm, which only took about 10 seconds. In my peripheral vision I could see the kid was already wet from head to toe and was soaping up his body with his hands. I was careful not to look directly at him as I didn't want him to think I was looking at him. Once the water was hot enough I stepped underneath the flow and let the water hit me on the head as I reached up with my hands and ran my fingers across my head and face to wash away the sweat. The soap dispenser was on the back wall and after rinsing off and getting my body wet I once again stepped out from underneath the stream of water, turned sideways, and faced the back wall and the soap dispenser. I reached up and pushed in the soap handle with my right hand and held my left hand underneath the dispenser to catch the soap as it was pushed out. I pushed a few times and the soap came out in big white foamy globs. It was one of those new soap dispensers where the soap comes out already foamy and bubbly. With my left hand full of soap I turned all the way around and faced the opposite side of the room, facing his kid directly, as I casually started to soap up my body. The distance between the two of us was about 15 feet but even pretending to focus all of my attention on lathering up my own body I could see him clearly as he was already fairly covered in foamy soap and was rubbing his hands over his chest and stomach. I was looking down and watching my own hands as they spread the soap on my chest and abs, but I would also momentarily glance up. The kid was facing me directly, standing to the side of where the water was streaming, and soaping up his body. I had also stepped out of the water and to the side so that the soap would not rinse off my body as well. As I soaped up more, covering first my chest and stomach, and then my arms, I continued to briefly glance at the young kid and sure enough I caught him glancing in my direction as well. It's at times like this when I wish we lived in a society where we could all just cut through the games and get to the point. There are some guys out there who are very direct and make it known very early in the process that they are interested in some fun. Whether it's online and a guy sends his first message to you saying how he wants to fuck and asks for your address, or whether it's a guy at the bathhouse who walks by your room and sees you laying there and without hesitation comes in the room, shuts the door, and reaches down to fill your hole and see if it's ready to be fucked. I love guys like this because they skip playing the games and they get right to the point. Then there are guys who take their time, and there's nothing really wrong with it, but it does stretch out the process a bit. Then there are situations like this where I wasn't even remotely looking for anything and yet there clearly was the possibly of something happening. So I stepped back under the stream of water and started to rinse myself off, but I continued to face the opposite side f the room and instead of just glancing at the kid I looked directly at him as I started to rinse the soap off my body. If the kid wasn't interested, or wasn't even looking, I doubted he would even notice as all I was doing was looking in his direction as I held my head under the water and ran my hands over my chest and began to rinse the soap off my body. To my surprise the kid looked at me directly in the eyes and just held his gaze looking at me. It was just two guys staring at each other, but when you are in a shower and both of you are naked this means something completely different. I continued to stand under the water and as I looked at him he for the first time reached down and started to stroke his cock. There was no denying it now. I knew when I noticed him staring at me as much as I was staring at him that there was something going on between the two of us that was more than getting cleaned up after a work out. However, with him being probably no more than 18 and the fact that I rarely play in public setting, I had held back doing anything in the off chance that I was wrong, or that someone would come walking into the shower room at any second. Yet here the kid was, now clearly stroking his soapy cock, and looking at me directly in the eyes as I looked into his. My cock, which was previously soft, soon started to harden as it was clear that this kid was now stroking his cock and he was doing it in front of me . I stepped out from underneath the water and reaching over I pumped some soap into my right hand and I brought my hand down to my cock and I started to stroke my cock as well. My cock was getting hard, and the kid's cock was doing the same. I knew he had a huge cock when I first saw it soft in the locker room, but as he stroked it I saw this monster cock come to it's full size and I had to try to hold my composure as my mind tried to wrap itself around how fucking huge it was. The kid had turned slightly to the side and as I watched he temporarily pulled his hand away and using his hips he swing his cock back and forth, no doubt showing off how big his cock was. It was a good 10" and hung straight out from his body. I couldn't tell exactly how thick it was but I doubted I would be able to get my fingers all the way around it. He once again was wrapping his right hand around it and started to stroke it, this time facing completely sideways but still turning his head to look at me every few seconds. I couldn't hold a candle to this monster cock hanging off this kid but I did my best and was quickly stroking my 7" cock. I didn't feel any sort of inadequacy in the face of his huge cock, as I doubted the kid met many guys who could match him in size. It appeared to me that the kid seemed more interested in giving me a show than anything I was actually doing. I couldn't tell for sure, but the way he was standing sideways and pushing his hips forward every few seconds as he stroked his cock, I was definitely getting a good show. A few times he grabbed his cock with both hands and it was at that time when I knew I was with one of the few lucky men who actually could use two hands to stroke their cock. I could grab my cock easily with one hand and have a couple of inches left, but I knew I couldn't grab my cock with both hands and have my cock fill both hands. This kid could do that and more. I watched as he put his two fists together, forming a long tube with his curled fingers, and literally fucked his two hands with his cock. Even with two hands holding onto the length of his cock he could stroke his cock and the head of his cock would pop out the end when he brought his hands to the base. I was watching a kid that knew how to stroke a huge cock.